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    Default Evening Avocet

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    Liked the colors of the Avocet and background.Shot in Nd. Wish for more HA but it was the best I got. Appreciate comments and critiques.Processed in Dpp 4 and Photoshop.
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    The low angle and the open bill are nice. Like the way the background and water blend together. Yes more of a slight turn would have been nice but this is still nice.

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    The light, low angle, and composition are lovely, Kevin. Open beak is a also a great addition; I hardly care about the head angle against that touch of action. The exposure looks good given the high-contrast subject. Only wish is that the bird's side was as sharp as the face, but it's pretty close and is a generally minor nit-pick.

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    I think it is a bit soft, other than that I think the HA is fine and the open beak is nice.
    Dan Kearl

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    Beautiful.

    Open bill and Point of view really adds to the image. Nice light as well.

    TFS

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    Perfect self-critique. And ditto all the positives above, especially the sweet light and the low perspective. John Mack might be right on the soft face ...

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    Wow, this is awesome! Great light, and such a wide yawn. I'm sure an additional round of sharpening for web presentation would work out rather well, just to get those fine details crisper.

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    I love the light and the low angle.
    Color palette is beautiful
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