Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: Hair flying in the morning sun...

  1. #1
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2018
    Location
    Sunrise, Fl
    Posts
    3,241
    Threads
    525
    Thank You Posts

    Default Hair flying in the morning sun...

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    EOS R EF400DO I 1.4xtc II f8 1/3200 ISO 800

  2. #2
    Lifetime Member gail bisson's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    Nova Scotia
    Posts
    12,731
    Threads
    910
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I like the light and the blue water in the BG.
    I am not crazy about the comp though. I feel you need to include more on the LHS.
    I also see some red chromatic aberration (thin red line outline) along the back and the front of the neck. ( I noticed that in one of your previous pics as well, but forgot to mention it.)
    Gail

  3. Thanks David Roach thanked for this post
  4. #3
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2018
    Location
    Sunrise, Fl
    Posts
    3,241
    Threads
    525
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Hi Gail,
    Thanks as always for your valued inputs. Different composition with more on left. As far as chromatic aberration, I reduced vibrance and saturation and reduced red channel slightly to hopefully help some. With my partial color blindness and lack of advanced color PP skills not sure if that helped or how to better address.
    Thanks again...
    Peace,
    David

  5. #4
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2013
    Location
    Waynesville, Ohio, United States
    Posts
    1,334
    Threads
    224
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Cool looking image. I like the original as I still see the red in the second .The first one the water suits me.I personally would do away with the high lights on the bill. Especially the one on the tip.TFS

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics