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Love this BG to set off this beauty and the water droplets. Wish for a slight bump in contrast for the eye only. TFS
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The bands of white/blue in the BG work really well with the stark white bird and provide some geometric support for the horizontal streak of yellows of the bill/eye complex. The water droplets provide movement in an otherwise serenely still and quiet image.
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Nice soft blue background with what i assume are clouds reflecting in the water. Like the water drops off the bill.
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Well done as noted above but there is too much negative space above the bird. Using an upper AF point would have improved it.
with love, artie
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As per Artie, the egret is too low in the frame. Pointing your lens down (with an upper FP) would have yielded a much better compositional result. Other than that, all else looks excellent. Beautiful BG!
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Thanks for the composition tip, much appreciated.
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