Hi Joe, different with an almost monochromatic look, but I'm not sure it's floating my book sadly.
I might be tempted to take a fraction off the RHS, however the beak just tailing off, perhaps a tad more DoF may have helped ie f/7.1 as you had ISO, or backing off a bit more in distance? Overall it has a
'sooty' look, inherent of LR and what it does behind the scenes and their crazy profiles, however... perhaps backing off in Contrast may help???? I would up the exposure by at least a third of a stop and add a tad more sharpening.
Texture, be very carful Joe, the name does not imply what it does, but if you get to grips with Texture, Clarity & Dehaze and work them correctly, then the addition is a good one for once!
Hope the RP helps clarify what I have said.
TFS
Steve