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    This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 6/12/18 at 7:24PM. Image processed in Lightroom and Photoshop.

    Hand held, Small crop.

    Canon 5D MarkIV
    Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
    600mm
    ISO 1600
    f8.0
    1/2000sec

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    Hi John a yet simple but very nice portrait , well done .
    All looking good to me !!!

    Only thing i would change is the WB and the greens looking a bit too warm and flat to me.

    TFS Andreas

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    Super shot John, love the close up and the grass seeds around the doe, my immediate reaction was great shot but the green colours are "wrong", a quick click on the white dropper will make all the difference.

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    Hello John,

    Beautiful Doe and super timing here, you framed this so perfectly with no grasses intersecting the subject's face. Great techs ( nice DoF!) and exposure is spot on. Good IQ and sharpness.

    Agree with Andreas and Jon above regarding WB, kindly have a look at this quick RP and let me know whether colours look more natural ? (in LR, tint -23 and temp 0). You can up the temperature if you like.

    Lovely work John, thank you so much for sharing!

    Kind regards,
    Gabriela Plesea

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    Nice portrait John, but the WB is way off, you need to go much cooler in both Temp & Tint, then you get to see the real capture.

    TFS
    Steve

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