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Greg"
Agree with your assessment . The head angle, wing spread, exposure, all good.
From a compositional standpoint, I might be tempted to try a bit off the left, with corresponding amount off the right. I wouldn't be afraid to go a bit more square, so the wings are working one diagonal of the frame, and the body/ head line works the other. Personal taste really.
Cheers
Randy
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Lovely flight shot, with open bill and perfect head turn. I don't mind the motion-blurred wings. I'm OK with the comp but Randy's suggestion sounds like it's worth a try as an alternate. I might use a low opacity brush to soften or remove the whitish blob to the right of the bird.
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Love the pose, super sharp eye, colors, BG and composition. Congrats. TFS
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Nice to see the dorsal view of this one. Nice green background. Love the colors on these guys.
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Hi Greg,
I saw the road sign to Wonga Beach when we were in FNQ! I wish I had known you lived there. It would have been fun to meet up.
Lovely bee-eater and your self critique is spot on.
Love that clean BG and wing spread.
If mine, I would do another round of NR and smooth out the yellow stalk on the RHS of the bird.
Very nice and would love to have this in my files,
Gail
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Originally Posted by
greg cowle
Thanks all for the comments, appreciated. I have attached a square crop per Randy's suggestion, I think it does work nicely. Didn't adjust the background, just did the crop. This is shot over a cow paddock with quite long grass, the white blob I think is just a stalk.
Gail: this was a few mile from Wonga Beach, in Upper Daintree.
Yep, this crop improves the image for me. And an awesome image it is. TFS
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Late to the party but this is a real beauty. I love small birds in flight, and this is a real winner of a shot. Nice BG, details, pose, and colors. TFS
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