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Lovely pose and nice feather detail. I would try sharpening the bill, and around the eye area a little as it looks a wee bit soft compared to the sharpness around the chest area.
Will
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Agree about the critical sharpness. But the feather detail looks very good.
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Thanks as always for the comments and suggestions.
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Nice. The face could go brighter for me. Consider doing some abstracts without the head :)
with love, arite
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Looks better with the brighter eye. I was not talking about decpatiating this bird, just suggesting that you be on the lookout for future abstracts with this species.
with love, artie
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Thanks for the clarification Artie and will do.
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