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    Griffin
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    Default Little Ringed Plover

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    Little Ringed Plover
    Lamma Island, 2008-01-05
    Canon EOS 1D MK.2, EF500mm L, EF1.4x II 550EX + BB, Flash -1 2/3
    f/11, 1/100s, ISO250
    camera RAW, cropped, turned a little, clonning

    Thank you for viewing and please comment.


    Regards,
    Griffin.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Very nice angle and light, Griffin. I might give it more room on top and little bit less right. Did you clone something in the upper right? It looks a bit darker than the rest of the BG.

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    Axel is right on with his comments. I would add that pointing the lens an inch or two more to the left thus moving the bird a bit back in the frame would be an improvement as would eliminating the credit line or greatly reducing the size and impact...

    I love the pink light and the reflection.

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    Jody Melanson
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    I echo Artie and Axel's comments. Very nice. I might brighten him just a bit as well.

    Welcome to BPN!

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    Fabs Forns
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    Hi Griffin, red carpet welcome to BPN!!!

    Great advise on how to improve a very nice image :)


    Looking forward to more.

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    Griffin
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    Thanks for all the comments.

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