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    Default Mallard Drake In Eclipse Plumage

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    I captured this image at Lake Morton in Lakeland, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    I like the wing position. I don't the eye/head is sharp enough.

    Overall Image looks a bit dull with the grey water. You can try to add curve layer to increase contrast.

    TFS

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    The wing position is perfect. I agree with sharpening the head a little bit more.
    I am not a fan of grey water so this is not my favorite of yours! Personal taste thing.
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    Jo the image does look a tad on the dull i.e. non vibrant side, the detail looks a little lacking - is it the NR killing it?? I am surprised you needed it - was the duck underexposed??

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    Hey Joe, I need more cowbell, I mean more vibrance! Maybe a rework, WDYT?

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    The flight pose is perfect. The light is what is what it is.

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    All good comments above. First off the bird is an obvious Mallard X Mottled Duck hybrid. (My understanding is that there are very few if any pure Mottled Ducks left ...)

    For the repost Image > Auto Tone at 80% worked miracles on this image. Denise Ippolito taught me that one. It was followed by pulling up the Curve a bit and a Contrast Mask on the face. All as detailed in Digital Basics II.

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