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    This image was created at Fort De Soto on 4/19/17 at 6:21PM. Image processed in Lightroom and Photoshop.

    Hand held, Medium crop.

    Canon 5D MarkIII
    Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
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    ISO 800
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    I like the image. I wish wing did not intersect the Green Foliage or the neck.

    I think you can add level to make the image pop.

    TFS

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    Nice flight position. Ditto Krishna's comments: maybe a bit of Tonal Contrast or some black to the neutrals would give it some pop.

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    I like the flight pose but agree that this needs a bit more saturation and would do as Bill suggests. I would also sharpen the head a bit.
    I wish the sandbar had not intersected with the bird.
    The more I look at this the more I think it needs some CW rotation,
    Gail

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    I agree with Gail re the rotation. You captured some nice details on the bird and I like the trailing legs. I would also try sharpening the head and neck a little.

    Will

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    nice light and pose, the far wing merge with the head is a bit fatal and I agree the head doesn't look tack sharp to my eye

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