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    Macro and Flora Moderator Jonathan Ashton's Avatar
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    This is the next frame to an image I posted previously. I am trying to win you over, I like it..... but you weren't too impressed by the previous post - how about this one?

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    Hi Jon - I still like the moody atmosphere but for some reason I notice the HA being slightly away more in this one. I do think the breath looks better and the tones of the head. I would do something about the very bright spots along the bottom of the frame though.

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    Hi Jon, I still like it, but after numerous conversations & RP I'm not sure in which way this needs to go. Andreas I think did a very good job on John M's Elk, perhaps offer the file to him and see what C1 can bring to the table.

    Still in too minds about updating it, but have not got the time sadly in the next four months to really get to grips and really see the advantages in PP of my images.

    Cheers
    Steve

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    This one seems to have more breath. The scene is very nice overall. Like the composition and the dark background.

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    Hi Jon i like it the same way i liked the previous one .
    Great setting and the breath and cold feel in combo with the warmer sunlight is just lovely . I do not mind the butt shot ...POV

    Maybe more depth in the shadows in the back , less depth in the FG shadows ( they do look almost black ) .
    I know a tricky one to deal with ....

    TFS Andreas

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