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I really like the image design. Common bird made much more striking with the added background element. Head is soft on the 5k imac
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Yeah, the moon is fun. Agree with the sharpness comment. Also wish either the front wing was higher or the light was a bit lower to get rid of that underwing shadow.
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You've been doing real well John but this one's not quite working for me. Heads a bit soft, the shadow bothers me and the out of focus moon isn't working. Keep shooting, you're doing really well, this one just missed the mark by a little bit.
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Having the moon in the upper left corner would have been better, artistically. A fun attempt, and for sure it is different.
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