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    Thanks to the comments received on the previous B&W images and some self study, I think I have found a sweet spot of selection of the right image for B&W and PP. Eager to know how it appears and appeals to your more experienced and better trained eyes.

    Nikon D850 600 mm, 1/2000s, f5.6, ISO 800

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    Nothing boring about this submission Jay, and it's a major improvement over your recent cheetah mound image,

    good tonality range here in your mono conversion, and like the outstretched and ready to up & move pose.

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    Beautifully sharp image that suites B+W really well imo ! I would be keen to see one with the Cheetah looking at you if you have it?

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    Hi Jay this a step in the right direction from the processing POV .
    Maybe a bit less strong blacks and whites in parts ....The head does look a bit heavy in sharpening ...? Splitting the sharpening in a light and dark half helps , then you can lower the sharpening in each half .
    Comp works well and the Cheetah is setting off nicely from the BG .
    Nice one ...
    TFS Andreas

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    Jay this is much much better - I really like it. Super composition and I love the background I get the impression the sharpening is a bit OTT, I have just read Andres's comment - I must remember that one!

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    The conversion is far better than the previous posting Jay, with a lovely tonal range, although I might ease on the feet and tail, look it's sharp too, well done.

    I think you need to reduce the © Jay, it's a little dominant.

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    Hello Jay,

    Nothing boring about this cheetah love the yawn and those outstretched limbs!

    Good techs, image well composed and processed. As mentioned above, blacks appear a tad heavy in places. Sharpness is there and nice detail where it matters. Background is superb.

    Lovely work, Jay - thank you for sharing!

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    Gabriela Plesea

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    The crop works well. Like the tongue of the cheetah and the overall composition here.

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    Nice composition and conversion. Looks satisfied more than bored to me.

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    Thank you all for your comments and encouraging words. Thanks to the theme of the month, I got to learn a lot about what works and what does not for B&W images.

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    Yeah this is nice, and the pose lends itself nicely to the conversion with the distinct shapes and curves.
    I echo that the blacks look a bit choked up in places (feet and tail as mentioned).
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    Hi Jay- This works so much better than your previous theme submissions and the conversion is more controlled (except for the choked blacks). Keep refining the techniques and studying other b&w to see what you like and why they work.

    TFS,
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    I like the etil and composition and the backgrund (as flou)..but for me it no have space expecially on the right side

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