Hi Mike -- Nice to see you posting here at wildlife forum .
A lovely and colourful backdrop. I find the frame is very tight at the foot, even though its feet might have been covered by the FG rocks / soil but still needs the space for proper balance and those virtual legs.
I find the subject soft , did you applied sharpening ?
Also watch out for the clipped highlights on its rump , looks like tricky lighting situation.
Hi Mike - Welcome to BPN and the Wildlife Forum. A very nice first post. I like the walking pose and the bg but agree with the others that you need more space below. Yes, the highlights along the back are a little hot. I do wish you had just the slightest head angle toward the sensor to see more of that eye.
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Thanks for the comments, everyone. It is actually full frame (was in a boat...bear walked close!), so unfortunately no latitude for more space below the feet. Full agree that would have been better. Will take a look at the highlights as I did not adjust that in post.
I use LR for post. Here I raised the shadows +35, sharpening +75 (with masking) on subject, and slight boost to contrast and saturation.
With respect to comment appearing a bit soft, it is actually much more detailed in the raw version. As image is not cropped, in order to keep to under 600kb i had to make 1220 x 1220...is there a better way to do that when exporting from LR? I normally just manually plug the pixel dimension to get desired file size.