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Looks pretty good for ISO 3200, John. Wet bird, rain, and perch are very nice, and I think you can get away with the OOF tree behind him as it is so far away.
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Great job with the exposure, the over the shoulder pose, and the head angle. I would lose the stick low right of the bird.
with love, artie
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ps: if you had move one foot to your left the bird's head would have been set against whiter sky instead of the darker branch ...
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Nice framing and the motion in the rain is a lovely touch. Good point by Artie about moving to your right if at all possible. If it was mine I'd be tempted to darken the BG on the left a little as the bright whites are a bit overpowering.
Mike
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I like the pose, composition and cold wet feel the image conveys. All good suggestion from everyone above. Well done John.
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