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    This image was created in the Great Smoky Mountains National Park on 8/2/18 at 6:34PM. Image adjustments in Lightroom and Photoshop.

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    Nice flow to this scene John...makes me want to see what is around the bend in the river. I would suggest opening up the shadows on the left a little bit.

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    I like the way you handled the water and I am with Andrew on opening up the left side of the image a bit. That said I am viewing in the car on a sunny afternoon :)

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    Really like this one John...great dof, colours and atmosphere..the water really leads the eye to the far bend. I agree with upping the exposure a tad on the right side. Cheers.

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