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    This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 7/29/18 at 7:29PM. Image adjustments in Lightroom and Photoshop.

    Hand held, Medium crop.

    Canon 5D MarkIV
    Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
    600mm
    ISO 3200
    f6.3
    1/250sec

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    Hi John yet another fine image of that species in terms of comp and placement of the subject in the frame .
    I prefer the previous image as the backdrop was a bit further away , so you had a better separation . Overall the image can stand a bit more tonal depth in HL and partly the mid tones ...IMHO.
    You are quite brave to shoot at 600 with 1/250 sec HH ......well if you are good in it , why not. At least at this size the sharpness seems to be there .
    TFS Andreas

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    Hi John - Like your last post, this again looks a bit thin and bright. I would definitely give the midtones a boost if it were mine. I also would burn the branch that looks like it is coming out of the rear end as it draws the eye. Finally, I would prefer a bit more room below for the virtual legs. You've certainly had some wonderful opportunities with these deer this summer.

    TFS,
    Rachel

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