White-tail Fawn

[John Mack]

This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 6/12/18 at 7:44PM. Image adjustments in Lightroom and Photoshop.

Hand held, Small crop.

Canon 5D MarkIV
Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
600mm
ISO 5000
f6.3
1/500sec

[Steve Kaluski]

Hi John, same issues as the previous posting re blacks in the BKG.

I find the pose a bit awkward, but the leaves in the mouth a nice touch. A lower perspective would have been better. The fawn looks a bit flat/light, you need to add some tonal range to give the subject form. Think the yellow flowers are a bit distracting, but lets see what others think. I. night go tighter a lose about half the space off the top, that would also remove some of the distracting twigs too and provide a better backdrop.

TFS
Steve

[Sanjeev Aurangabadkar]

Hi John, Steve's critique is spot on, agree with most of the suggestions. The leaves in the mouth are a nice touch with good use of that high ISO.

[Rachel Hollander]

Hi John - I'm also going to agree with Steve's critique. He covered all of the salient points. I too find the pose slightly awkward, I think it's the twist to the body so not really anything you could do about it. The leaves add to the image.

TFS,
Rachel