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    JP Bruce
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    Canon 40D, 300 f2.8, 2X conveter, 1/350 at f6.7 ISO 800
    Sunset at Willcox, AZ Second try following recomendations.
    Thanks to all for input.

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    Great arrangement and separation and nice moody background !
    Great wing positions on 5 out of 6 (wish upper lright bird had wings more fully up or down).

    I think I'd prefer the birds to be farther up in the frame with slightly more space below them
    than above them and maybe take a bit off of the right side.
    Last edited by Arthur Morris; 01-09-2008 at 04:23 AM.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    I think this one works much better. Maybe a bit NR on the BG. I might tone down the bright spot underneath bird no. 1 in the lower lane. :)

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    Hey JP, This one is way better. Agree with a quick mask over what I believe is the sun. Love the spacing and all the wing postions but the one. Five out of six is pretty good. If you were gonna make a print it is sometimes possible to grab a bird from another image in the series and import it. It can be tough at times to match or blend the BKGRs.

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    Did real good JP !!!! Excellent suggestions given Most noticeable is the bright spot mentioned by Axel !!! Keep going after them !!!

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