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    Default Juvenile Red-shouldered Hawk (Buteo lineatus)

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    I captured this image at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated.

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    Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED image captured at 400mm
    1/2000 F/8 Matrix Metering EV +2/3 ISO 720, camera supported by a monopod
    Post processed in Lightroom Classic CC and Photoshop CC 2018
    Cropped from horizontal to vertical for composition and presentation
    Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 06-21-2018 at 08:25 AM.
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    Nice calling pose.
    He looks like he is all hunched up. Was it cold?
    I would brighten the bird by 1/2 stop.
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    Love the pose and perch. The catchlight is cool too. I also thinking brightening the bird could help. I like that we can see the claws. TFS

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    Agree with Gail about bumping the exposure. The pose and perch are great. Is this the same hawk you keep running into or different one?

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    Nice calling pose and the chest area especially on the bird looks great. Gail was spot on about the exposure. Start with half a stop and go from there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John Mack View Post
    Agree with Gail about bumping the exposure. The pose and perch are great. Is this the same hawk you keep running into or different one?
    Hi John, the same juvenile hawk. Every time recently when I go to Circle B I have found it in the same area. Thank you for viewing and commenting.
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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. Here is a repost with the exposure raised.
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    Nicely captured pose of this juvenile, Joe. It's flattened down feathers and pose reinforce the young, submissive look. Open beak is a nice touch too. I also thought the original looked a little underexposed and your repost has fixed this. Great detail and simple, effective composition.

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    I prefer the repost I may even consider lifting the darkest tones a little more.

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    Gorgeous repost, Joe.

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