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    I made this image in provo Bay, with fill flash on the subject.

    Hope this one does not look washed out.

    I removed out of focus white object in bottom right corner.


    Nikon D500, 500 f/4 + 1.4x TCIII
    ISO 1250 f/7.1, 1/160 sec
    Matrix Metering, Manual Mode

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    Raw Processing , C1Pro
    Sharpening - Affinity Photo
    Noise Reduction - Neat Image

    Hope you like it.

    Thanks
    Krishna

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    Nicely balanced comp, and a beautiful BG - except for the lower part that I would fill in to eliminate the whitish areas. The image does not look washed out per say, but the midtones could use some judicious darkening. Nicer ans sharp, and I like the thin feather strands sticking out behind the head.

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    Hello Krishna, I agree w Dan's suggestions. The rust of the robin looks off, too bright and too orangey... I would also crop tighter on the bottom to eliminate the whitish grey area neath the wing. TFS

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    Nice detail on the bird. Agree about the white along the bottom.

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    Thank you all for the comments.

    Reposting the image based on feedback

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