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Looking good Jon. Nice crop which shows the perch in a good place. Lovely colours on the bird and a big bonus with the prey. I would try some contrast on the bird, make it 'pop' more.
Will
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Agree with Will on the contrast adjustment other wise very nice pose with the bonus prey item
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I like the gangly perch and the bird looks good with the prey item and a nice pose. I think a bit more contrast, and maybe a wee bit more sharpening on the bird would help. TFS
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Lots to like here, Jon: nice looking bird with prey, good pose and the perch works well for me. It does look very African (a mopani if I'm not mistaken?). I like the antennas up on the beetle too - as if wondering 'what game is up here'. It will soon find out. Others have commented on tone/contrast and sharpness which I agree are worth revisiting.
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The repost makes all the difference. Awesome image with beautiful colours.
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Yes, the repost makes a big difference. Great pose, and bug.
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Hi Jon, a great view of the European Roller, and the colours are spot on. Great that he has caught a Beetle for his meal, and your repost works well. Another clean shot for a Kruger Trip.
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Really nice pose and perch here. The beetle is great. I think the repost is better but it is still not right. Bird does not look tack sharp to me and I still find the colors a little thin.
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Originally Posted by
Isaac Grant
Really nice pose and perch here. The beetle is great. I think the repost is better but it is still not right. Bird does not look tack sharp to me and I still find the colors a little thin.
Isaac, it's sharp, maybe you prefer more sharpening. This bird is colourful but not so colourful as the lilac breasted roller.
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Jon the repost can't be far from perfect with colours that are spot on and nice natural sharpness,very well done.
Keith.
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Hi Jon, RP is definitely an improvement and both techs and colour look great. May be a tad more selective sharpening, but again, this is only 'perceptional' sharpening. Nice control of the darks and shadows, but feel the subject would sit better in frame if flipped L to R.
TFS
Steve
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Hi Jon - The second frame for me with better colors and the prey is a bonus.
TFS,
Rachel