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    A favorite flower of my backyard buddies. The BG is a fence.



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    Overall very nice. I'd prefer more room right and left. I find the stem running almost parallel and close to the edge visually odd. Does the fact the BG is a fence make this image a candidate for the "Hand of Man" forum? ;-)

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    Nice capture, I like the flower, details and BG. The bird has a slight green cast and I would remove one of the catchlights. I would also give it more room left and right.

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    Wow, that's really nice! Did you boost the flowers or are they naturally that saturated and bright? Either way, I like the effect.

    I'd probably like to see the left edge moved over a bit so the flower comes right out of the bottom left corner. I'm not picky about the right side though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jim Poor View Post
    Wow, that's really nice! Did you boost the flowers or are they naturally that saturated and bright? Either way, I like the effect.

    I'd probably like to see the left edge moved over a bit so the flower comes right out of the bottom left corner. I'm not picky about the right side though.
    No boosting, they are this vibrant.

    I see we are all kinda of varying opinions on the crop. I think it needs more on the backside (right and some off of the top and a bit added to the left. Alot of adding and subtracting. Either way I appreciate the comments as they are valued. :)

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    Way cool flowers and sharp on the eye. No H-O-Man as the fence is unrecognizable. I would love to see more of the near-wing.
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    Nice colors, relatively good detail. I agree about the catchlights. As for the crop, lets just say I think it could be better, but I guess I am not the person to offer good advise on this subject because I seem to be having the same problem.

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