Nice concept. I like the basic COMP. I might take a bit more of the bottom. Might also get rid of the merge between the one seed head and the bird's bill.
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I like the setting and head angle. It would be even better if they bird were a bit less obstructed by the flowers in the foreground. Maybe a bit more room at the top.
Nice composition and soft mood. I think the focus hit the vegetation rather than the bird, but it isn't awfully out of focus. I think this would be a good candidate for and Orton Treatment.