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    Default Spring Has Sprung - I wish

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    Canon 7D2, 400mm f4 DO IS II, 1.4x TC III
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    I took this shot last April at the Botanic Gardens in Memphis. A Robin collecting nesting materials...
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    I like the pose and the nesting material. I do wish we could see more of the eye however. On my screen the image looks pretty cold and the WB could be warmed up a bit. TFS

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    Thanks for the feedback Alex. I added +10 to saturation for this repost. Hope it is an improvement.

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    I really like the bird and the nesting material. Good look back pose. Agree that I wish they eye was more visible. The colors are off on the bird and the background. Also the white balance looks off as well. I think you could address this by adjusting the levels black point and midtones or adding some blacks in selective color. Also the grass looks too yellow to me.

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    I like your composition here Allen, and yes Spring has to be round the corner. I'm learning about color adjustments etc myself, so lots to learn... terrific behavior captured.

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