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    Default Reddish Egret Running With Caught Fish

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    I captured this image in September along the north beach at Ft. De Soto County Park in Pinellas County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    The fish and running on the water is great. The processing looks off to me.

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    Hi Joe,
    I agree with John that something very wonky has occurred in your processing of this image.
    You have a great action pose here so I look forward to your repost!
    Gail

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    John and Gail, thank you for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated. Here is another go at processing the image.
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    Hi Joe,
    It still looks very weird. Very contrasty and a lot of noise on the wings. can you post an unprocessed image?
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    Joe, I love the action you've captured in this one and think the repost is a considerable improvement. I can't see the noise Gail refers to. It is quite contrasty though and wonder what the lighting was like at the time? Worth another go, I think.

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    To me, the weirdness lies in the fact that the middle tones look much too dark ...

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