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    Oscar Zangroniz
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    Taken last Saturday at Crandon Gardens

    Nikon D300
    Nikon 70-200 2.8 vr
    Focal length: 190mm
    Shutter speed: 1/640 sec
    Aperture: 2.8
    Exposure mode: Av
    Flash: Off
    Metering mode: Multi-segment
    ISO: 400

    Your comments and critiques are most welcome.

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Oscar - Nice bird - gotta love peacocks.

    Head angle doesn't look to bad to me, however find the lack of detail in the eye distratcing.

    I have D/L and tried some adjustments.

    Applied some shadow highlight correction to the entire image - then backed the blues off a bit.
    Tried to lighten and sharpen the eye.
    Also sharpened a bit as well - might be too much.
    Last edited by Lance Peters; 06-22-2008 at 08:07 PM.

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    Sid Overbey
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    Lovely shot Oscar. The original blue was a little intense and I liked the way Lance muted it. Good capture!

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    Nonda Surratt
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    These guys always look not quite real! Good going Oscar! Nice re-post Lance, like what you did with the eye.

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    Alfred Forns
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    You guys are cleaning up with the peacocks !!! I like the work around the eye on the re post !!

    Excellent framing and good head position !!!

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    Lovely shot Oscar - actually I liked the blue in the original!! Like Lance's eye though.

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    I agree with Nicki on both points. Nice shot.

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    awesome capture, oscar!! love the framing. lance's work on the eye is good too!

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    Way to go Oscar! See you Saturday AM

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    Lance; from now on, you will be called "THE EYE MAN"...:D:p;) I like the clean up on the eye...:D
    Oscar, I like the capture and composition...congrats...:D

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    Gus - thanks mate - yeh I have a real thing about the eye's - its so easy to fix and makes abig difference.

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