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Nice flight pose. This crop works for me.
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This is nice.
Comp is perfect, great subject matter and nice top-side view.
The blacks in the face are blocked and I think you can get more detail in the blacks with more PP.
Another housekeeping issue is the sharpening halo visible along the leading edge of the wings and head.
With a bit of tender loving processing this image could shine! Hope you do a repost!
Gail
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This is a HOT bird. Cool looking albatross there is in my book. Great to see one posted here. Nice view of the wings and love the position of the wings. I would brighten the image a touch. Also wish the head was facing us a bit more.
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Interesting post. I would have raised the shadows in the Head a little bit and Added more canvas to the left
Thanks for sharing.
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Lovely bird and agree that more detail could be extracted to give it a lift.
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I love it as presented but for a bit more detail in the dark face. I would normally not be thrilled with the head turned slightly away from us but I think that that adds to the comical look. The dorsal view is wonderful with any albatross and this one is no exception. Were you traveling by ship and landing at various sites?
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Apart from wishing more details on the face, this is a pretty darn appealing image. I love the gray-brown on pale gray. Neat bend to the wings too.
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Thanks all for the comments, I'll go back in and see what I can do to improve.
To your question Arthur, yes this was the Heritage Expeditions itinerary "Galapagos of the Southern Ocean", very good itinerary including fabulous Macquarie Island, and luckily on my trip we got all but one of the landings, the Southern Ocean can be rough.
Greg
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Many thanks Greg. I have been to the Southern Ocean many times and am going for the Emperors next OCT -- bucket list :) I have been pretty lucky with the weather.
with love, artie
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