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pretty cool head shot, techs all look good from here, sharp with good exposure. the problem with shots like this is that there isn't enough DOF to cover the beak and at the eyes at the same time, and the tip of the beak goes totally OOF. still an interesting perspective. the head is too tight in the frame you need a bit more room around it
TFS and welcome to BPN
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I'm personally OK with the DOF for a head-on image like this as the bill is very long anyhow. I do agree the composition is too tight however. Good focus on the eyes, and nice details on the head feathers.
Big welcome to BPN!!
Last edited by Arthur Morris; 11-28-2017 at 06:04 AM.
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Nice first post Loren and welcome to BPN :) Like Daniel, I am fine with the (lack of) d-o-f. Even if you had gone to f/45 at some absurd ISO and focus on the eye, the d-o-f in front of the plane of focus at f/45 at 3.5 feet would have been only 1/4 inch. That with all due respect to my good friend Arash. Zooming out a bit and creating a vertical original would have been the best plan. Lastly, I think that the midtones might look better a bit lighter.
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Thanks Daniel. Much appreciated!!!
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Thank you Arthur!!! Glad I found the right place...
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Thanks for all your help - here & in the field!!!
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Hi Loren, I like these close-up down the beak views, even though you can't get the tip in focus. You have the eyes nicely in focus, and it gives a really interesting view of the color and shape of the feathers on the head.
Greg
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Thanks Greg! Much appreciated!
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Hi Loren, I love this shot. I think the color of the BG is a great contrast to the colors of the subject. The eye contact and the look make this image pop. The tilt of the head is great too. Thanks for sharing.
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Hi Loren, love the composition. The image gets the viewer because of the close-up and HA.
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Thanks so much Noel! Much appreciated!!!
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Thanks so much Jay! Much Appreciated!!!