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    Early morning shot, liked the highlight and atmosphere early in the bush

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    Hi Loukie Do like the early morning light, face looks good but the back is very dark. I am looking from a laptop but even the top side seems a bit dark, will see what others see.

    Also would like the animal further back in the frame and maybe a little more room. The virtual feet are close to the lower edge. It does have a great feel and could be greatly enhanced with a couple of tweaks !!!

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    I agree with Alfred that the back portion looks black and it needs more space in the front.
    I am wondering how it would look if it is placed in the top left hand corner and with more depth of field.

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    Just a bit dark on my monittor but easlily corrected. Take the head out of the center of the frame by placing the waterbuck a bit left in the frame would strengthen the composition.. Nice light to work with.

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    I agree with Robert's suggestion on the recrop for the image.

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Loukie,
    Agree with posiible improvements already mentioned. You had very nice light on the waterbuck and i do know that in Africa.........clean BG's are rare............so i like the way you handled it overall.

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