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    Default Sandwich Tern Diving For Fish

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    I captured this image on the bay fishing pier at Ft. De Soto County Park in Pinellas County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    1/2500 F/5.6 Matrix Metering EV +1/3 ISO 280
    Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC 2017
    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    You did very well to get this fast diving position.
    Image looks dark and I would increase the exposure. I would also try to sharpen up the head-it is sharp but not
    'tack sharp".
    Composition is good for my taste, Gail
    PS. I am on my laptop and realize that my monitor brightness may be showing the image as too dark...
    Last edited by gail bisson; 10-11-2017 at 06:19 PM.

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    The action and pose here is great Joe. Brightness looks fine on my monitor. This one does look a bit soft to me though - maybe a bit of motion blur as I guess the bird was moving pretty fast here? Framing and composition work well for me and you have handled the colour and tone skillfully, as usual! Thanks for sharing.

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    Hi Joe, I like the colour palette here and the inclusion of the horizon is a nice addition. Agree that the subject looks a tad soft, perhaps not quite 'looked on', or is this a hefty crop? If you brighten it just be careful of the whites in the body. I do however like the yellow tip of the beak, just breaks the overall colour up.

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    Hi Joe, I agree it is a wee bit soft, but what a terrific flight pose you captured, you can 'feel' the speed. Lovely colours throughout.

    Will

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    Very Interesting image. It conveys the motion.
    Thank you for sharing.

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    Thanks everyone for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated.
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