White-tail bucks

[John Mack]

Two white-tail bucks sparring in the evening. Image adjustments in Lightroom. Hand held, full frame.

Canon 5D MarkIII
Sigma 150-600 Contemporary
600mm
ISO 4000
f6.3
1/200sec

[Rachel Hollander]

Hi John - Nice low pov and good action. The comp works for me. The image does look a little soft though. You needed a faster ss to freeze the action. If it were mine I would darken the greens of the grasses.

TFS,
Rachel

[John Mack]

Thanks Rachel.

[dankearl]

SS is a bit slow but I like the comp.
I would desaturate the greens a bit.

[Andreas Liedmann]

Hi John a well timed frame of the sparring deer ...comp does look balanced to me .
I do agree about the greenery , i think getting a overall cooler WB might help .
I would wish to get more of the eye from the right hand stag , a bit too dark and dense in tone for my liking .
Still a nice frame .
SS might be a bit slow for that action .
TFS Andreas