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    Black-neck Stilt walking the walk.
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    Nice low angle here Jay, do you possibly have a shot a fraction later with a view of one of the feet in a clearer walking pose?

    I might be tempted to lose some off the reflection as having it cut off isn't ideal, and replacing it with more negative space above if you have it.

    I do like the framing horizontally with the ripples though.

    Nice work

    Mike

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    Very nice.
    Terrific POV and I like the BG shoreline a lot.
    Looks like a cloudy day so I am wondering if you added the catch light.
    I would smooth out the vertical OOF grass that intersects with the bill.
    You could crop a bit off the bottom but you need to leave room for the virtual legs so I think I would leave it as is,
    Gail

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    How's this for a rework?

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