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    Time for a (probably temporary!) break from Puffins, and back to Fort Desoto. Here there was some cloud cover which gave the lagoon a nice (in my opinion) high key look against the bird.

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    I knew this was from Fort DeSoto. Something about the light and water color.
    Nice low POV and good DOF.
    I would boost saturation on the bird a bit to show off the nice color in bill and feathers,
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    PS Does this need a hint of CCW rotation?

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    Beautiful looking high key image Mike, Love the Pose and the nice details. I agree with Gail about bumping up the saturation a bit to give it some nice pop. Rotation looks good to me though. Well done
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    Hi Mike,

    You are practically in my neighborhood. Was this in July? I like everything about the image but the bird looks a bit over-sharpened and jangly to me ...

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    A lovely shot. Ditto comments above: yes to a little more saturation, a little less sharpening.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gail bisson View Post
    I knew this was from Fort DeSoto. Something about the light and water color.
    Nice low POV and good DOF.
    I would boost saturation on the bird a bit to show off the nice color in bill and feathers,
    gail
    PS Does this need a hint of CCW rotation?
    Quote Originally Posted by David Salem View Post
    Beautiful looking high key image Mike, Love the Pose and the nice details. I agree with Gail about bumping up the saturation a bit to give it some nice pop. Rotation looks good to me though. Well done
    Quote Originally Posted by Bill Dix View Post
    A lovely shot. Ditto comments above: yes to a little more saturation, a little less sharpening.
    Gail, David, Bill, thanks for the crit, I've tried to address the saturation a bit below, and backed off the sharpening. The only output sharpening was a small amount around the eye.

    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Hi Mike,

    You are practically in my neighborhood. Was this in July? I like everything about the image but the bird looks a bit over-sharpened and jangly to me ...

    with love, artie
    Thanks Artie, this was from back in April, a substitute photography morning after we unfortunately couldn't meet up at Gatorland. Hopefully this addresses the above points.

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    Thanks Mike. July would have been quite a bit early for this species. Good job on the properly sharpened repost.

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    Well done Mike, the repost sure makes the bird look better. I like the pose you got and the POV.

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