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    Nice flower and i like the green. Maybe if everything was over to the right just a tad. The lily pad is pretty close to the left side of the frame.

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    Beautiful colors and very good overall sharpness! I would agree with John about the comp. You might consider cloning the small bright areas in the URC as they are drawing my eye away from your subject. Otherwise, very nicely done!

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    I really like this, I would be inclined to add a little canvas to LHS and to the top. I love the hint of something, there are several areas that are showing plants stems, I feel they are a good thing, I may even be tempted to bring them out just a tiny bit more.

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