I captured this image at the end of March at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. The winter had been very dry, Florida was in drought conditions and the ponds and water pools at Circle B were drying up. The shallow ponds were attracting wading birds to feed on the trapped fish and crustaceans. I captured this image of a Roseate Spoonbill flying in to join the other birds in the pond. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.
Nikon D500
Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 280mm
1/2000 F/5.6 Matrix Metering EV +1/3 ISO 280 AWB
Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC 2017, removed out of focus trees and branches in the bottom of the frame that added nothing and distracted from the bird in the bottom of the frame
Cropped slightly to position the bird and canvas added to the rights side for composition and presentation
Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 06-24-2017 at 06:36 AM.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
Great downstroke pose, angle in frame, breeding colors. Comp works for me.
I do tend to try really hard to get some background in the image if possible, it adds so much to the sense of depth. Clouds, trees, hills, something. I absolutely appreciate that there are times when it just isn't possible, however.
Great downstroke pose, angle in frame, breeding colors. Comp works for me.
I do tend to try really hard to get some background in the image if possible, it adds so much to the sense of depth. Clouds, trees, hills, something. I absolutely appreciate that there are times when it just isn't possible, however.
Might be interesting to see the original frame.
Hi Randy, thank you for viewing and commenting. After reading your comments maybe the out of focus trees do add to the image. Here is a repost with the trees that I just worked up. Let me know your thoughts, I would be interested if others chimed in. Thanks again.
Joe Przybyla
"Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams
As much as I like pane #1, after seeing the original frame I agree with Randy that the out of focus trees add a great deal of depth. Beautiful warm light and down stroke of the wings.
Hi Randy, thank you for viewing and commenting. After reading your comments maybe the out of focus trees do add to the image. Here is a repost with the trees that I just worked up. Let me know your thoughts, I would be interested if others chimed in. Thanks again.
It is a beautiful bird with wonderful lighting. Well exposed and focused. Like the down stroke wing pose. I prefer this one with the bg.
Last edited by John Whaley; 06-25-2017 at 06:28 AM.
Yep, the trees in the BG do add a lot. I'd prefer without the vertical part below the bird though. Great downstroke pose, and looks like you had good light.
Trees for sure. Agree with Daniel, you might do a bit of judicious trimming on the area just beneath the bird to give a bit more clearance, but I would take this as is everyday over a blue sky shot!
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