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    This image is from a trip to Bald Point State Park in Panacea, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Nice composition and background the bird looks a little soft to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John Mack View Post
    Nice composition and background the bird looks a little soft to me.
    Hi John, I revisited the image changing a couple things. I think the softness you saw might have been because of low contrast, sometimes images that are low contrast appear soft. Here is a repost.
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    delicate bird on a delicate perch. nice BG too, I think the repost is a bit too contrasty. would go with the original and add bit more sharpening. TFS
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    Quote Originally Posted by arash_hazeghi View Post
    delicate bird on a delicate perch. nice BG too, I think the repost is a bit too contrasty. would go with the original and add bit more sharpening. TFS
    Thanks Arash, after reading your comment I revised the image as you suggested. Thanks again for viewing and commenting.
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    I like the image something is just not quite there for me - was it a big crop? Was the first oversharpened and the second under sharpened? I sense the image is good but something not quite right in the processing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathan Ashton View Post
    I like the image something is just not quite there for me - was it a big crop? Was the first oversharpened and the second under sharpened? I sense the image is good but something not quite right in the processing.
    Hi Jon, thank you for viewing and commenting. I would say the crop was larger than I would have liked it to be but I liked the setting/image a lot so I worked it up. After reading yours and Arash's comments I began again with the original, fewer things done to this in post. Here is a repost of the redo.
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    Jo, I still have some reservations, maybe it was the light or even perhaps a slight breeze.... is the eye pin sharp at 100%?

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