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    EF600mm f/4L IS II USM +1.4x III
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    Shot during windy and rainy day. Hope you like it.

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    Tomasz:

    You have captured the weather off that day well, with the drenched bird, blown plant, a few raindrops, and the soft light.

    Just enough catchlight to be effective. I like the spread legged stance, birds angle in the frame.

    A very personal compositional thought, but the last clump of the plant in the upper left tends to pull my eye that way and away from the bird. The leading line is so strong from the stem, that it pulls my eye that way.

    If you have more canvas to work with, perhaps some alternative crops could be explored.

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    Love the light, pose, plant, bird, background. I had the same thought as Randy, particularly since that upper left leaf cluster is cut off. Do you have room to include the whole thing with more of a pano? (Admittedly it would make the good looking bird a bit smaller.)

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    Thank you both. Unfortunately i don't have the left part. If i had more time i would move focus point to the right and maybe fit the entire green stuff on the left.

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