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    Default Egret

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    good head to contrast with the flight movement. Is the grayish line around the bird part of the topaz impression?

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    But for the gray outline, I really, really love the look here. Can you post the original for comparison? And, if I might be greedy, I'd love to see a repost without the gray outline.

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    Hi, Mitch, I like the painterly look with the broad brush strokes in the background and the diagonal line of the egret. I agree about the gray line and I would also like to see you remove those bright squiggles around the egret's left foot. Nice one, Mitch
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    Arthur,
    I'm working on it...
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