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    I captured this image at Fort DeSoto Park, Florida, with the Nikon D500 Handheld and AF-S Nikkor 200-500mm 1-5.6E ED VR
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    All C & C's will be greatly appreciated.

    Thanks for looking

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    I like the composition but i think the bird is a little on the dark side , could just be my monitor though.I also think it could use a bit of noise reduction on the background.
    One more thing , that bird is a Marbled Godwit.

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    Nice pose on the bird i also like the low angle, good background as well.

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    Oops, Thank you Stuart, you are right about the bird's name. Will have to wait and see what others think and I could be wrong, But I don't think the picture is dark and I can't see any noise on the background.


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    Hi Juan, like the low angle, nice florida light, head turn and calm. Nice room for the virtual legs as well. To me, the bird looks well exposed. Im wondering what a version would look like without the black band on the top? Not a deal breaker by any means but feels a bit heavy compared to the rest of the BG. TFS

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alex Becker View Post
    Hi Juan, like the low angle, nice florida light, head turn and calm. Nice room for the virtual legs as well. To me, the bird looks well exposed. Im wondering what a version would look like without the black band on the top? Not a deal breaker by any means but feels a bit heavy compared to the rest of the BG. TFS
    Thank you Alex, I thought about removing the black strip and then decided against it since I think framed the bird well, but here's the version you mentioned. I wonder what others think.
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    Hi Juan,
    Perfect head angle on this lovely marbled godwit.
    Great POV, nice calm water and tack sharp.
    I noticed the bit of black at the top of the frame and agree it should be cropped out as in your repost.
    Exposure looks ood to me and I do not see any noise.
    Lovely image!
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    I think your repost looks about perfect. Lovely image... thank you for sharing, Juan.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Juan Tolentino View Post
    Thank you Alex, I thought about removing the black strip and then decided against it since I think framed the bird well, but here's the version you mentioned. I wonder what others think.
    Thanks for going back and doing a RP -- I like this version more. Very nice frame

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    Yes, I like without the darks creeping in at top. Perfect head angle, and separation between the legs. If anything, I'd prefer a bit looser comp, but it is still OK as is. Exposure looks good on my monitor as well.

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    A very nice image, and I think the RP is spot on. Lovely colours throughout with a great HA

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    Nice color, lighting and feather detail. I love it when I misidentify a bird and it turns out to be something better! mush better without the dark line on top

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    Looks great! Well done on the RP too.
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    Me likes the creeping dark :) The original brightness looked fine and the BKGR looked noise free.

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