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    Default Eurasian tree sparrow

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    Excellent, the colours on the bird is perfect to my eyes,lovely detail.

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    A sweet image Tomasz, with a lovely complimentary backdrop. My only comment would be, drop the Blue, evident in the beak and reduce the yellow in Luminance and or Saturation for the lichen on the branch.

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    Beautiful done overall. I like how the yellow lichens match the base of the bill. I'd likely burn the extreme LLC as there is a bit of a pale area there. Otherwise all good.

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    Thank you all for feedback. Can anybody tell me what LLC stands for? I am not sure what that means.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tomasz Zawadzki View Post
    Thank you all for feedback. Can anybody tell me what LLC stands for? I am not sure what that means.
    Hi Tomasz, lovely image. Thank you for sharing.

    LLC is abbreviation for Lower Left Hand Corner
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    All looks great to me. Colors, details, that great perch. You have been posting lots of really great looking shots. I would likely clone out the darker area on the lower left.

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    Thank you guys for the feedback.

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    Here is the frame after i have applied your tips:

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    Tom first class, my first reaction was reduce the yellows a little. The comment regarding the blue - I must admit it didn't occur to me but just a slight reduction does indeed make a significant improvement to an already lovely shot.

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    Getting rid of the pale area, the one in the LLC , made a big difference.

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    Would not have noticed it if Steve had not pointed it out but the removal of the blue certainly works.

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    yes quite a nice image cloning helped

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    Love the first version, and the second is even better. Congrats on a great image.

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    Excellent image with beautiful colors and nice details. Superb BG and composition.

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