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    Alfred Forns
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    From a trip to San Diego at the start of the year. From Santee Lakes a great place for ducks both in the number and settings. Here I was trying something different, we were getting the ducks to dive by feeding sinking corn and I wanted a different crop on the image. This is basically a full frame image, so the framing was in camera.

    Lots were cut, clipped and generally massacred but some turned out decent. This is one of them and was wondering what you thought?

    Comments welcome and much appreciated

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    I like it all, except that dark oof foreground wing.......wish it were stretched back a bit so as to barely see the underside.
    As is, I would likely crop more off left, about to where you AR initials are, but it's all a matter of taste on this one.

    good to see the variation

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    Alfred, I like this! It's a very unusual look at the duck. It seems to be a little soft on my monitor though.

    Dan Brown

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    Looks it bit soft on my monitor, too.

    So, what was the duck doing actually ? :D:D

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    Love the eye and the detail. The wing on the right is distracting until you figure out what is actually going on.
    Does look a little soft.

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    This is a female wood duck and she is flapping to dry her wings. We use a sinking type duck food so they need to dive .... so the feathers get wet and they need to flap !!! :cool:

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    Alberto Oria
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    Mmmmmm, so many tricks to learn:).

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    Jonathan Michael Ashton
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    Yes it does work! I think the head of the duck could perhaps stand a little more sharpening - but maybe if the feathers are wet it wouldn't change the appearance? Have to agree about the blurred dark left wing it does detract a little.
    Jon

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    Mr. Al, I like it as presented...:) It gives the impression that the duck is flying backwards...:D

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    I like it as presented - looks a little soft on my monitor too.

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    Hey, Alfred, dare I? It looks like I'm in the minority here. I like the colors, the background, the head and especially the eye, but not that oof dark wing in the foreground, and it does look like the duck is sailing backwards. Until you explained it, I couldn't see/get the concept. IAC, it raised my interest so maybe that means it does work?

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    Great shot Al, love the composition and the head angle. Looks sharp on my monitor.

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    Anytime "Don Alfredo" ask does this work? I got to get in.

    Well, it does work.
    It is a beautiful action portrait of a Female Wood Ducky

    But as most know we all have different taste.
    I prefer the crop I posted.

    Thanks Al, keep challenging everyone.

    James

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