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Sasan"
Quite nice, always fun to have some new gear to try out.
The pose is excellent, the berries give a real pop to a fairly monochromatic bird.
I would prefer your signature not to be in that central of a location in the frame, quite distracting.
Nice soft background.
Cheers
Randy
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Randy pretty much covered it. Comp it great. I wish the light was not so harsh and you didn't have the shadows below. Would have made an already very nice shot better if the sun was lower in the sky. Also having never seen those berries in person I can't comment for sure but they seem really red and I would consider toning those down a little by either lowering the luminance and saturation of the red or by going into selective color and adding some cyan to the reds.
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Originally Posted by
Randy Stout
Sasan"
Quite nice, always fun to have some new gear to try out.
The pose is excellent, the berries give a real pop to a fairly monochromatic bird.
I would prefer your signature not to be in that central of a location in the frame, quite distracting.
Nice soft background.
Cheers
Randy
Hi Randy
I also think it is not proper signature.............thank you for helpful comment
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Originally Posted by
Isaac Grant
Randy pretty much covered it. Comp it great. I wish the light was not so harsh and you didn't have the shadows below. Would have made an already very nice shot better if the sun was lower in the sky. Also having never seen those berries in person I can't comment for sure but they seem really red and I would consider toning those down a little by either lowering the luminance and saturation of the red or by going into selective color and adding some cyan to the reds.
Hi Isaac
thank you for comment , i will try your idea
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Originally Posted by
Daniel Cadieux
Ditto the boys above! Beautiful image. Although subtle, can you see what I did on the repost?
thanks Daniel, your frame is better
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Dan took a tad off the top for better compositional balance. Am I correct in assuming that this image was created at a set-up? If yes, what type?
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Arthur Morris
Dan took a tad off the top for better compositional balance. Am I correct in assuming that this image was created at a set-up? If yes, what type?
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Hi artie
thanks for comment
yes of course ,this image was created by a set-up.This bird is very much loved apples and fruit's of this tree and thereby attracted to this perch
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Originally Posted by
Arthur Morris
Dan took a tad off the top for better compositional balance.
Yep, and I added a bit at bottom too.
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Originally Posted by
sasan nejadi
Hi artie
thanks for comment
yes of course ,this image was created by a set-up.This bird is very much loved apples and fruit's of this tree and thereby attracted to this perch
Hi Sasan,
We ask folks note that an image has been created at a set-up so that beginners are not confused ... Many thanks, and thanks for your membership support.
with love, artie
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