Napali Sunset

[Jonathan Spool]

I just got back from Kauai. It is quite a magnificent island. I removed a distracting branch in PS. I wasn't sure if the existing dead branch should stay or go.
OMD EM1 MKii. M Zuiko 12-100 f4 Pro
1/640 sec f/8 28mm

[Andrew McLachlan]

A nice silhouette Jonathan. I like the inclusion of the dead branch...if it were mine I would be tempted to crop off some of the bottom portion of the silhouette as it is a little heavy for my tastes with that much solid black along the bottom edge...looking forward to more from your trip!

[Don Railton]

Hi Jonathan

I too would crop a bit off the bottom. The dead branch does not bother me

Don

[Jonathan Spool]

Thanks for the suggestions and input. I will see what that looks like considering the move out of an 8x10 format.

[Don Lacy]

Hi Johnathan, Agree with the others on taking som off the bottom as well as a bit from the left.

[Jonathan Spool]

Here is a repost of the picture taking into consideration some of the suggestions made to me. Let me know what you think.
Thanks

[Amanda Robinson]

I prefer the warmer image, your shots are wonderful.