Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Song Sparrow

  1. #1
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Location
    Lakeland, FL
    Posts
    7,533
    Threads
    2,043
    Thank You Posts

    Default Song Sparrow

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I captured this image along Joe Overstreet Road in Kenansville, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

    Nikon D7000
    Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AR-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
    1/1250 F/5.6 Matrix Metering EV 0 ISO 200
    Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC 2017
    Cropped for composition and presentation
    Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 01-26-2017 at 11:09 AM.
    Joe Przybyla

    "Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams

    www.amazinglight.smugmug.com

  2. Thanks Jonathan Spool thanked for this post
  3. #2
    Macro and Flora Moderator Jonathan Ashton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    Cheshire UK
    Posts
    17,331
    Threads
    2,663
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Well focused and a pleasant pose I would suggest lowering the exposure a little. I think you can get more detail in the chest /throat.

  4. #3
    Lifetime Member
    Join Date
    Mar 2013
    Posts
    3,555
    Threads
    543
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Great capture of this songster. Nice and sharp, and the barbed wire perch works for me. Lovely shade of green BG.

    Geoffrey




    http://500px.com/geoffreymontagu

  5. #4
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Location
    Lakeland, FL
    Posts
    7,533
    Threads
    2,043
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathan Ashton View Post
    Well focused and a pleasant pose I would suggest lowering the exposure a little. I think you can get more detail in the chest /throat.
    Hi Jonathan, thank you for viewing and commenting. Here is an edit and repost. I lowered the exposure and revisited the sharpening.
    Joe Przybyla

    "Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams

    www.amazinglight.smugmug.com

  6. #5
    BPN Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2014
    Location
    Lakeland, FL
    Posts
    7,533
    Threads
    2,043
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoffrey Montagu View Post
    Great capture of this songster. Nice and sharp, and the barbed wire perch works for me. Lovely shade of green BG.

    Geoffrey




    http://500px.com/geoffreymontagu


    Hi Geoffrey, than you for viewing and commenting. The green background is a grassy cow pasture that is behind the barbed wire fence.
    Joe Przybyla

    "Sometimes I do get to places just as God is ready to have somebody click the shutter"... Ansel Adams

    www.amazinglight.smugmug.com

  7. #6
    Macro and Flora Moderator Jonathan Ashton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    Cheshire UK
    Posts
    17,331
    Threads
    2,663
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Much prefer the repost Joe!

  8. #7
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Oct 2013
    Location
    Lincolnshire UK.
    Posts
    4,951
    Threads
    187
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    The repost is the one for me Joe,smart neat bird on a lovely smooth bg.

    Keith.

  9. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Oct 2014
    Location
    Staten Island, New York
    Posts
    3,124
    Threads
    260
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I love that kind of background. Really sets the bird off nicely. Exposure on the original image is fine to my eyes. The repost is too dark and the whites of the chest and belly have turned gray which is not what you want to happen. Perhaps you could add a little extra sharpening to the original and a better head angle would have been more ideal as well.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics