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    She turned her head to look at something or other and I got the beak in profile. For whatever reason I see a big of vignetting on some of my jpgs, but not in the TIFF files (which I don't expect at all, using a crop factor body). Maybe there's just enough to show up on a JPG, given the lower image quality? Can't say for myself. Anyway, here's Luna yet again.

    7d mkII, Sigma 150-600, 1/2000 @ f/6.3 (widest aperture for that length), ISO 800

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    I like the one good eye, and the beak in profile. I would have preferred her to the left, with space to look into. Also note the white right-hand edge.

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    Bills comment on composition is right and would improve the image a lot,don't think it would be a big job to add some more canvas if you were so inclined,I personally would think the image is worth the effort.Would love to photograph one of these.

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    Better?

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    I like that much better Jake,still wonder if there is a little bit more you could do to lift this image.

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    yes nice high key look

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