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    Soon I will be driving south for a day of scouting Burrowing Owl locations for early May when I will spend a few days photographing them and their owlets. This is one from last year that I worked on recently using better techniques in post processing. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    Joseph,

    I quite like this image. The IQ is very nice, but I feel you could have pushed it over the top with a slight bit of fill flash to bring out the sunken eyes of the owl. Overall its a very nice image.

    Chris

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    Excellent image. Beautiful pose and composition.

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    I like this Owlet with the nice stretched pose,don't think I would change a lot apart from maybe a tad more contrast a maybe just lighten the eyes just a little bit.Just my thoughts Joe and until I have played a bit with an image such as this am never sure.Very nice piece of work.

    Keith.

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    I think this is super Joe, I think the eyes are fine, I would suggest burning the sandy soil. If you felt so inclined you could mute the background a little more using Viveza contrast and destructure,

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    Nice shot of this guy and some good suggestions from the group. Well done
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    I like the outstretched wing, mean stare, sharpness and setting. I agree that the white Florida sand needs to be toned down a bit. Well done Joe.

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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. Very much appreciated...
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