Hi Stu, you are getting the framing and vision right, that's the hard part, as you really can't teach that as such, techs & PP is just learning over time and is the easy stage. Never be afraid to post, it's the way you will learn and make progress, and never be afraid people don't like it. F/4 here, I feel is too shallow, look at eyes to muzzle, I appreciate the light, but just push the ISO Stu.
Just opening the Exp up a fraction, addressing the greens and WB I think helps bring a bit more
'life' to the capture, albeit perhaps away from the original setting. Some more localised sharpening on the subject and a bit of NR also helps.
Have a good Xmas.
