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    I captured this image of a Green Heron at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AF-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
    1/1600 F/5.6 Matrix Metering 0 EV ISO 640 AWB, camera supported by a monopod
    Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC 2017, the tips of a couple misplaced leaves removed
    Cropped for composition and presentation
    Last edited by Joseph Przybyla; 12-10-2016 at 08:17 PM.
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    Excellent image with beautiful background. Love the way it pops up against lovely BG. Great details and IQ.

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    I do like this Joe nice clean and simple that bg is lovely,Heron looks good from it's beak to it's toes,tiny nit but would like to see this with a bit more on the left as I look at it.

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    Very nice image, nice perch, great bird and smooth background. The crop seems a bit tight on his head. I would either open up the crop top and left a bit or just move the bird down in the frame a little more.

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    That is a gorgeous shot, lovely even light and an interesting pose on a stem showing how those feet really look. I think I would agrre with previous comments suggesting a little more space to left and top.
    I really enjoyed this image - thanks Joe.

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    Lovely colors needs a little more room left of the bird.

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    Thanks everyone for viewing, commenting, and suggesting improvements. Here is an edit and repost with more room on the left and top as suggested.
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    That looks just fine Joe.

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    Joe, I think you need to look at your masking & cloning, top LHC, the lighter patch looks a bit odd.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Joe, I think you need to look at your masking & cloning, top LHC, the lighter patch looks a bit odd.
    Hi Steve, I see the area that looks odd at the top left. Not sure why, no work was done in that area. Easy fix, I blended it in with the rest of the background. Thanks for looking and bringing that to my attention.

    P.S. Looking at the original it had to have happened when I extended the canvas on the top and left. To quick to post an edit I missed it.
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    Beautiful portrait, great pose and colors.

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