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Hi Sanjeev - Good that they are all looking at you. I think you needed a bit more dof and ss here. I presume the fp was on the one in the middle but they all look a little soft and the fur/hair a little muddled. My eye also keeps going to the part of the hippo in the bg. Not sure if it is the pp or the image capture. Sorry.
TFS,
Rachel
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Hi Sanjeev -- As Rachel the only thing working here is all of them looking and the river backdrop adds to the scene , but that hippo is a serious distraction . Light appears a bit harsh to me , you could have easily increased that iso for more dof in return .
TFS !
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I quite like it actually, I feel the lights handled well and the shadows have good details. Hippo doesn't bug me too much
Yeah I suppose a bit more DOF (Maybe f11) and the ISO 800-1000 may have been better. I would crop the dark layer off the bottom just leaving the reeds and no mud.
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Sanjeev I thought the slightly OOF one on the left distracted from this image but the more I look I think it's ok,it's really good how they are all giving you there attention.
Keith.
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Nice composition with them all looking at you Sanjeev, but as Rachel has pointed out with that 500 prime I would have expected far greater fur detail on the middle WB, agree the cut hippo does draw the eye.
TFS
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Lovely shot I would be tempted to apply a little more selective sharpening to the centrally positioned buck. I really like the light and colours.
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Nice trio here and nice layering.
I find myself agreeing with Rachel here. Some extra sharpening on the middle buck would also help?